句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章组织结构良好;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误。
I have a good friend.She is a beautiful girl with long and balck hair,black and big eyes,dedicated nose and also a slim face.Most of all ,she is always kind of everyone. She is good at learning English and is favoritable with arts like painting.She is acute and adorable.There were moments that I would be the prince of her.