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2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:42浏览次数:1779
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Advertising which can be seen everywhere in daily life influences what people think is important and has negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It seems that more and more languages become extinct as social development. Some people believe that using fewer languages can make the life be easier and more convenient. But I think that the advantages of protecting languages outweigh the disadvantages in this case. It is important for governments to prevent their languages from destruction and respect their cultural heritage. Every country has it special language, which reflects the history of their change and symbolizes the customs and traditions. So language is a part of countries identity. If languages of some areas die out, it is difficult for us to gain a better knowledge about their cultural development. On the other side, protecting languages can contribute to cultural diversity. We live in a multicultural society and we need a wide range of languages to decorate our life. For example, there are many languages in China and every nation has their own language. If the increasing number of languages are disappeare, the areas may lose their attraction to tourists thereby influence the tourism income. However, the varieties of languages may have negative effects on international trade and cooperation. They may find it difficult to share information and make negotiation when use different languages It will waste time to sign an agreement and hold back the improvement of living especially in poor area where people do not have knowledge and techniques. In addition, compared with using different kinds of languages, using the same languages is more likely to make people gain a sense of belonging. In conclusion, even though the decreasing languages can bring some benefit in some cases, I think that we should protect our languages and choose to use a few languages as the main communication tool.

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