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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。
With time passing by, I am going to graduate from university in the near future. During the 4 colleage years, I have learnt a lot from both teachers and classmates. When I'm sitting in the classroom and taking part in the final exam during my student period, I conclude 3 valuable things the 4 college years have taught and prepared me for my future life：self-directed learning, dependence and cooperation. First of all, self-directed learning plays a significant role in my life, not only in college years but also in the future. When I was in the high school, school leaders and the teacher in chagre of my class always supervised and ugred me to learn, to finish homework and to hand in them in time. But when I start leaning in college, everthing is different from before. No one often remind me of learning although I still need passing many exams. At that time, autonomous learning is particularly important. I must learn to make most use of my time and opportunities to learn, so that I can manage my task successfully. One day I enter into the society, i still need to learn on my own with on one's supervision, so it is really helpful for me to know how to learn by myself in the future. Second, dependence is of great value I have learnt in college years. I have been an adult when I entered into college, which means I have to be dependent. I must take good care of myself, learn by myself and use my own ability to finish assignments, rather than being protected well like before. Dependence is an excellent quality that helps me solve many problems without help. From this process, I become more confident and encouraged. I believe I can manage my future work well with the spirit of dependence. On top of that, 4 college years help me realize how important cooperation is. Although everyone can be depedent, we are living in a group. Therefore, many tasks and assignments need being completed by group's power. No matter what teachers ask us to do in the form of group or attend some collective activities, we need to negotiate and cooperate. Besides, every individual may have diffenent opinions, so I must know how to listen to others and cooperate with others. Only in this way, can we finish the duties and finally get a good result. Simialry, when I have a job, I need to cooperate with my colleagues. So coopeation is also a meritorious quatity which i have learnt for me to prepare for my future. To sum up, self-directed learning, dependence and cooperation are the 3 most worthy things I have learnt at university, which helps me a lot when preparing for my future life. I appreciate it to get these. And may myself a glorious future with the 3 good qualities.
