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文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Working Hard and Keeping Fit Chen Hua was a middle school student。He used to stay up at night to study.He believed his studies were more important than anything else.So that his body is Sub healthy state.At last he fell seriously ill.He understands the importance of body.He always takes part in sports and goes out with friends all kinds of activities.Because he understands his body fall ill is used to study hard.Now he will play baseball with his friends in the gym after school .He always does exercise in the morning.Now he has a good health and understand how to keep fit. So Chen Hua is an example.If you want to have a good body.So you need to do more exercise.
