2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中高级词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多。

As is vividly depicted by the drawing,there are two man on the boat throwing rubbish into the river which has become extremly dirty.unbelievable,the boatman continues to row his boat,not prevent them from improper behavior.under the picture is the caption:"the surplus"of the travel.this picture epitomises a common phenomenon that a growing number of people are little or no attention to the significance of the ever-increasing serious environment pollution. As is vividly depictured by the drawing,ther are two disabled men founded the value of cooperation,for example,if they combined their legs together,they could travel all over the world together with our combined legs.This picture epitomizes a common phenomenon that an increasing number of people are paying closer attention to the significance of the cooperation,which is soul-searching .As is vividly depictured by the drawing there is a boiling"culture hotpot" involving a variety of elements of culture,such as KongFu,religion and so on,under the picture is the caption:the culture hotpot is not only delicious but also nutritious.This picture epitomizes a common phenomenon that an increasing number of people are paying closer attention to the significance of the international culture communication,which has become pervasire and beneficial.