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I will take my friend to a famous place. there are ancitent place that call Zhao zhou.the place have many good place and many food.It is alcoted in Shi Jiazhuang south He Bei provience. There is a famous brige which is called Zhao Zhou Qiao.Of course,it has many own lengen.The lenden is that Lu Ban made the brige, Zhang Guolao who is a god ride horse passing the brige, and another god cart,and then there are two traces about horse and cart.However, it is true for people to be built by Li Chun in Sui dynasty. Zhao Zhou has pear that is a very delicious fruit. So you know it is a good place.