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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16921
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文章衔接手法恰当;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

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I will take my friend to a famous place. there are ancitent place that call Zhao zhou.the place have many good place and many food.It is alcoted in Shi Jiazhuang south He Bei provience. There is a famous brige which is called Zhao Zhou Qiao.Of course,it has many own lengen.The lenden is that Lu Ban made the brige, Zhang Guolao who is a god ride horse passing the brige, and another god cart,and then there are two traces about horse and cart.However, it is true for people to be built by Li Chun in Sui dynasty. Zhao Zhou has pear that is a very delicious fruit. So you know it is a good place.

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