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I will take my friend to a famous place. There are ancient places that calls Zhao zhou.The place has many good places and many foods.It is located in Shi Jiazhuang south He Bei provience. There is a famous brige which is called Zhao Zhou Qiao.Of course,it has many own lengends.The lengend is that Lu Ban made the brige, Zhang Guolao who is a God ride horse passing the brige, and another God push a cart,and then there are two traces about horse and cart.However, it is true for people to be built by Li Chun in Sui dynasty. Zhao Zhou has pear that is a very delicious fruit. So you know it must be a good place.