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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16957
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文章衔接手法恰当;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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I will take my friend to a famous place. There are ancient places that calls Zhao zhou.The place has many good places and many foods.It is located in Shi Jiazhuang south He Bei provience. There is a famous brige which is called Zhao Zhou Qiao.Of course,it has many own lengends.The lengend is that Lu Ban made the brige, Zhang Guolao who is a God ride horse passing the brige, and another God push a cart,and then there are two traces about horse and cart.However, it is true for people to be built by Li Chun in Sui dynasty. Zhao Zhou has pear that is a very delicious fruit. So you know it must be a good place.

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