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托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:16浏览次数:1426
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.

Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.

题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。
2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具,满足舒适的生活已经足够。

用户的作文(系统评分23.0分
评语:

文章组织结构良好;能适当使用从句,但不够熟练;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,另外文中有较多拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

money and comfortable living money is an good things for many people, included I. many people want got money can did anything including crime thing. in the end, those people enter to the paison. so i want to ask moeny are important? my views is that money just the tool to exchange the meterail, it is enough to people that can pay the nesively lives .

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