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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3006
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分58.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

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The Way to Success There are variety of success in this world, and one of success is suitable for you. The way to success, it is very important to get along well with other people,such as your business circle,only you build a good relationship with them, they will help you to walk further.Second, is inist, no matter what you have experience the worst trouble, never say give up in easily, if you can learn how to insit, you will never gain the success be easily.Third,you should have your own skill, if you didn't have fundamental skill, you will be don't know what you should do in next step.So you should improve youself.

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