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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9054
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Internt has been come to our life. It is important for us, students,to get much informeition and get education. But the internet education can replace the traditional education.Is that true? I know ,today, we can get everything that we want. Therefore, we can also study on the internet.That is true.But we cannot make the internet education become our almost study way.As for me, I like the traditional education which we can communicate with teachers. It is imposseble for the former. The latter can make students enjoy the class joys.Of course, students can build up a good friendship with teachers.Maybe, They are the traditional class advantages.However,I do not deny the internet education which it also has many advantages,for example,quickly,convenience,ect. I hope we can use rightly the internet education.Only if can we have a good study, and in case we are absorbed in the internet.

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