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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Internt has come to our life. It is important for us, students,to get much information and get an education. But the internet education can replace the traditional education.Is that true? I know we can get everything that we want today. Therefore, we can also study on the internet.That is true.But we cannot make the internet education become our all study ways.As for me, I like the traditional education which we can communicate with teachers. It is impossible for the former. The latter can make students enjoy the class joys.Of course, students can build up a good friendship with teachers.Maybe, they are the traditional education advantages.However,I do not deny the internet education which it also has many advantages,for example,quickly,convenience,ect. I hope we can use rightly the internet education.Only if can we have a good study, and incase we are absorbed in the internet.
