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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；从句数量不足；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear John Driscoll: I am Tom Smith of Fox Electronic Comply sales Department manager. we have sure the launch date of new product meeting is 20th.on 6.This meeting main conclude new product introduction and advertising activity. At the same time, i also hope build up permanent partnership with you.I am looking forward to your reply.
