如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;部分高级词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Sir or Madam As a Chinese,I wish our native language could be popolarization.So I want to contribute to the promotion in Mandarin by teaching a foreigner Chinese and I an writing this letter to asking whether you can recommend a canditate. To be specific, Firstly,the man could be proficent both in Chinese and English.Secendly,he/she has experience as a teacher in high school or college.Last but not least,I will provide him/her with 5000 yuan each mouth. Please contact me when you find a proper canditate.It would be hopehul if you send me her/his photo and relevant information.I appreciate your attention and hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Li Ming