如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇基础挺好,能灵活使用部分高级词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Sir or Madam As a Chinese,I wish our native language could be popularization.So I want to contribute to the promotion in Mandarin by teaching a foreigner Chinese and I am writing this letter to ask whether you can recommend a candidate. To be specific, firstly,this man is good at Chinese and English.Secendly,he/she has experience as a teacher in high school or college.Last but not least,I will provide him/her with 5000 yuan each mouth. Please contact me when you find a proper canditate.It would be hopehul if you send me her/his photo and relevant information.I appreciate your attention and hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Li Ming