文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;复杂句采用很棒;文章层次较为清晰。
Some days,goods made in china have good reputation around the wolrd,it dominant at the international market and become the pride in the heart of chinese.However,everything change frequently.For lacking in creation and leading position,they are laughed by western people when production tied of “made in china”export overseas. On one hand,world industry can stand for the quantity of chinese economy;On another hand ,it also indicate the fact that china is in the bottom of the industry chain.the goods made in china rely on the human resource,it is a big harm to our environment and natural source,what can damage our ecology.