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作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；文章层次较为清晰。
Some days,goods made in china have good reputation around the world,it dominant at the international market and become the pride in the heart of Chinese.However,everything change frequently.For lacking in creation and leading position,they are laughed by western people when production tied of “made in china”export overseas. On one hand,world industry can stand for the quantity of Chinese economy;On another hand ,it also indicate the fact that china is in the bottom of the industry chain.the goods made in china rely on the human resource,it is a big harm to our environment and natural source,what can damage our ecology.
