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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9028
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Some days,goods made in China have good reputation around the world,it dominant at the international market and become the pride in the heart of Chinese.However,everything changes frequently.For lacking in creation and leading position,they are laughed by western people when production tied of “made in china”export overseas. On one hand,world industry can stand for the quantity of Chinese economy;On the other hand ,it also indicate the fact that China is in the bottom of the industry chain.the goods made in china rely on the human resource,it is a big harm to our environment and natural source,what can damage our ecology.

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