采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,单词拼写更认真��。
Recently, there has been a heated discussion among general public about that it is unsensible to draw a conclusion immediately when you hearing and seeing. As far as I'm concerned,an uncertain answering can reach large numbers of people with a certain efforts that can make them undoubtedly think the messages is real and credible. On many occasions, people find it will cause many of people become the victims. Many a reason may account to this action. First of all, people in today's society always lack the ability to rethink a thing so that almost of them cann't figure out what will happen after they recklessly spread the news.Most striking reason is the stressful life result them want to persue some kind of excitement perceptions. For example, with the proliferation of entetainment circle people's life news everyday, there are always more and more people preoccupied with it. Therefore, the whole society is veiled by an untrust atmosphere and it has been becoming a rule of thump. In my view, the phenomenon mentioned above is deteriorating on a daily basis, so great concern concern and attention are deserved. Firstly, it's of great importance for ours to build a behaviour that we should rethink it before we do a thing. Secondly, the most significant way is set the society up for a cautious statue so that we can create a fairness atmosphere as soon as possible to prevent people this action. Only by these means can we have the chance of changing this phenomenon.
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