采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Recently, there has been a heated discussion among general public about that it is unsensible to draw a conclusion immediately when you hearing and seeing. As far as I'm concerned,an uncertain response can reach large numbers of people with a certain effort that can make them undoubtedly think the messages are real and credible. On many occasions, people find it will cause many of people become the victims. Many a reason may account to this action. First of all, people in today's society always lack the ability to rethink a thing so that almost of them can't figure out what will happen after they recklessly spread the news.Most striking reason is that the stressful life results them of pursuing some kind of hectic perceptions. For example, with the proliferation of entertainment circle people's life news every day, there are always more and more people preoccupied with it. Therefore, the whole society is veiled by an untrust atmosphere and it has been becoming a rule of thump. In my view, the phenomenon mentioned above is deteriorating on a daily basis, so great concern concern and attention are deserved. Firstly, it's of great importance for ours to build a behaviour that we should rethink it before we do a thing. Secondly, the most significant way is set communities up for a cautious statue so that we can create a fairness atmosphere as soon as possible to prevent people this action. Only by these means can we have the chance of changing this phenomenon.
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