从句使用量太少;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Hi Mary I’m Li Ming, I can’t talk discuss ahout matter of to celebreat New year with everybody because I’ll go to Beijing on business. I want to put you in charge of this matter. It is up to you hold a part .Please notice everybody the time and the place of your final decision, and the needed preparation. Li Ming Dct 23rd 2008