拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
Think before we leap. Some are prone to drawing conclusion without deliberation, which is not advisable. The conclusion one makes rapidly may well be incorrect, for most things are not what they look superficially. If we hurry to draw a conclusion, we are likely to hurt others' feelings and meanwhile lead to others problems. In about 2009, a nuclear reactor in Tokyo leaked out the radioactive materials, issuing in the phenomenon that people poured to buy idolized salt. That's because when people heard that idolized salt could benefit their bodies and keep them from the harm of radioactive materials, they drew a rapid conclusion and were easy to believe. That was ridiculous. So we should not be hurried to judge what we see and what we hear at the first time. We should endeavor to make the judgment precise.
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