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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Think before we leap. Some are prone to drawing conclusion without deliberation, which is not advisable. The conclusion one makes rapidly may well be incorrect, for most things are not what they look superficially. If we hurry to draw a conclusion, we are likely to hurt others' feelings and meanwhile lead to others problems. In about 2011, a nuclear leakage happened in Tokyo, issuing in the phenomenon that a host of Chinese, especially the seniors and the middle-aged people, rushed to buy iodized salt. That's because when people heard that iodized salt could benefit their bodies and keep them from the harm of radiation, they drew a rapid conclusion and were easy to believe. That was ridiculous. So we should not hurry to judge what we see and what we hear at the first time. We should endeavor to make the judgment precise.

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