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2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:39浏览次数:8753
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题目 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
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1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证
2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命
3.学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才
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用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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Nothing Succeeds without a strong will The strong will is an important part of success as evidenced again and again.If you have this mind,you would have reach to the succeeds. There is no doubt that those of people who have firm faith will finish the greater mission.Do one thing,it just depends on fantasy no marginal and talk irresponsibly that never makes a difference.Because the stumbling block is filled with everywhere the whole of your life,and both of things don't work it in specific time obviously.You have to own some spiritual things which encourage you to forward,that is what plays a key role in your life whether you have these of awareness or not.On the other hand,we should that draws the belief from life and to make it get your qualities.Then it will affect your acknowledge for life as have experienced something accumulative.Afterward it would make you arrive in your terminal by using the extraordinary conviction. When you are a student,the situation is similar with your learning experience.If you didn't work hard,you would have turned into a conventional one.Therefore how to develop this kind of the strong will is especially important in the way of succeeds.

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