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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40866
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。

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Living in an age when we adolescents are lack of guidance, we are prone to believing in what we see and hear without adequate thinking. Under this circumstance, we are liable to draw a rapid conclusion, which is not advisable. In about 2011, a nuclear leakage happened in Tokyo, Japan, an army of the Chinese, especially the middle-aged people and the seniors, rushed to buy the iodized salt, which was regarded as useful to protect people's bodies from the harm of radiation, without any deliberation. That was ridiculous. People are apt to draw a quick conclusion at the first sight. The reason I held the conviction that we should not draw a rapid conclusion when we analyze everything mainly consist in the two aspects as follows. We might not only not get the facts but also hurt others' feelings, by virtue of lack of the information. We are more likely to make a wrong decision based on the wrong conclusion. Secondly, if we draw a rapid conclusion rashly, what we say and our viewpoint may not be persuasive. In a nutshell, it was not advisable to draw a conclusion hurriedly. Only through the deliberation and analysis can we draw a safe conclusion.

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