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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9759
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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In many countries practical solutions to protect wildlife do exist, however it is not useful if there aren't solid legislations world-wide enforcing humanity to behave. Trade in endangered animals and plants is still climbing up at a alarming rate. Penalties are too minimal to stop those destuctive human activities leading to the continuous problems as illegal hunting, deforestation and pollution. Some people hold the thought that human beings is doomed by what they desire from the nature. With the increasing demand from the commercial societes, the habitats of both flora and fauna have been losing ground to those skyscrapers and factories leaving the fatal environment for endangered species.The developing conditions of human life is costing the beautiful environment our planet has originally offered especially in those developing countries such as China.According to one recent survey, in China there is less than 10% cities which are able to provide clean air for their citizens. Soon, the number of species is getting less and less till it comes to mankind. Everything human touches will be doomed,and that leads to the extinction of humanity as a species being wiped out by the nature itself. The situation is becoming bad to worse if we don't take it serious,hopefully, now many countries have realized how much our action has caused us thanks to the efforts that scientists and environmentlists have been making. It is a high time to take severe panishment for those companies or individual who have been trying to break the law to make profit.It is a high time for government to educate their citizens with love and respect for the mather nature. It is a high time for people to pursuit a way to deal with the increasing population and decreasing available nature recourse.

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