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An increasing number of museums can be seen opening to the public for free these days.For appearing more person to visit it.Nevertheless this also brings about some problems. For one thing,cultural objects of museums don't be protected well because of a lot of people.For another, the environment of the museums might also be damaged. From my perspective,