2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? An increasing number of parents can be seen mastering all of their children these days,which brings about some obstruction to growth of children. Making children developing a habit of independence,parents should encourage children to deal with their own things:wash clothes,go shopping,even make plans etc.And parents can talk with their children about their currently thinking. From my perspective,it is of great importance for parents to give children some right introductions.