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Personal Appearance: Looks Really Count Recently, whether personal appearance looks count or not has arose people’s widespread attention. Some argue that it is nothing and it is not necessary for everyone has a good looking; however, others still hold the idea that personal appearance plays an important role in daily life and work. Of course, I’m of the idea that personal appearance looks really count. On the one hand, there is no defying the fact that personal appearance is one of the basic requirements when we are hunting jobs. On the ground of a good appearance leaves a deep impression to the employer, so making up properly and dressing up certainly may bring you to success. Good personal appearance makes a man looks energetic but not weak. On the other hand, personal appearance is also important in looking for a partner in marriage. When a good-looking girl is introduced to a boy by the go-between, the girl’s beautiful face will to a great extent make the boy fall in love with her. On the country, the boy actually leaves the girl along when he meets an ugly appearance on her. From what we have discussed above, perfect personal appearance benefits us a lot from many aspects, therefore, we cannot ignore the truth that really looks count.
