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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
Living in an era that most things go so fast that people feel tired and hope that it's best that we have no problem to handle. But as the saying goes "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them". which I can't agree more. What we will have without problem is not happiness but lazy which cause us have no enthusization to face the challenge of the unexpected future. It means that you just do everything you did, and life is repeating again and again, which I think it's terrified for most people. As a student, I will face many problems in my daily life such as new courses, new people and so on, and all give me passion to deal with these problems, because I would find the progresses I have made and make me be a better person.Of cause, difficult problems also make us dispperasion especially we couldn't find a excellent way to fix it. In my opinion, it's time to challenge ourselves or to find friends to deal with it together. As the statement above, a lif with no problem is boring and problems give us a chance to make progresses and find friends who can give hands when you are in trouble.
