文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强。
Living in an era that most things go so fast that people feel tired and hope that it's best that we have no problem to handle. But as the saying goes "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them", which I can't agree more. What we will have without problem is not happiness but lazy which make us have no enthusiasm to face the challenge of the unexpected future. It means that you just do everything you did, and life is repeating again and again, which I think it's terrified for most people. As a student, I will face many problems in my daily life such as new courses, new people and so on, and all give me passion to deal with these problems, because I would find the progresses that I have made and make me be a better person.Of caurse, difficult problems also make us desperate especially we couldn't find an excellent way to fix it. In my opinion, it's time to challenge ourselves or to find friends to deal with it together. As the statement above, a life with no problem is boring and problems give us a chance to make progresses and find friends who can give hands when you are in trouble.