正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy.He has short black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. His voice is better. He good at playing basketball He is a clever boy.He likes reading books , playing computer games and chess.He is also nice.He often helps us .Our classmates like him very much.