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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；全文结构较为严谨；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
In recent years,a sum of people consider that happiness is living in a life without problems around.However,in my opinion,Iam agreed with the saying that "Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them." The reason in this statement is following.To begin with,in our life,there must some problems we have to face with.As a proverb says that"Life includes happiness and troubles."Happiness is closely associated with problems,and the key is to invert the problems into happiness.Only when you develop your ability to deal with problems successfully,can you feel your truly happiness from your heart for you defeat the troubles which you thought you can't overcome before.For example,oral Englidh learning is a good case in this point.In the past,I couldn't speak a fluent English.Each time my teacher asked me to answer a question,I felt too upset and embarrassed to speak a word.After that,my teacher had a word with me snd encouraged me to open my mouth to speak.From that,I enxouraged myself to open my mouth to speak without fearing to make miatakes.After practicing for a long time,now I can speak Engliah fluently. To sum up,happiness is the ability to deal with troubles instead of the absence of them.After managing to defeat the troubles,we have a sense of truly happy.
