2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇使用熟练灵活，但要注意避免拼写错误；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

Sustainable development concernde more and more attention in such an economic-oriented era for a long time.Two young women,who are relaxed by enjoying the landscape and travelled by a boat,however,they don't mention the rubbish on the lake and throw plastic bags into it.The skipper takes a blind eye to them. As we can see,the pollution of environment becoming more serious.several factors weigh heavily for this serious situation,yet there are two cardial isues suspended on the top of the list which should never be overlook.On the one hand,we used to let our own ego out and pursue our own happiness,hardly realized the importance of nature to us.On the other hand,the dearth of publicity concerning the necessity of ecology in accordance with compatible development,the importance of law is a crucial factor. Luckily,it's not the day of judgement!better later than never,just as a classic saying goes.If the drastic measures would be taken immediately,such as laying down the compulsiveve-effective discipline to prevent the incivilization from creeping everywhere,delivering the positive circumstance-caring outlook to guide us efficiently and implententing the pro-environment manners to live in a much more harmonious atmosphere. For the sake of tuneful tomorrow,please cherish the mother nature,sharing with us.