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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Volunteering to teach in the west has a great significance to promote local education and economy.Undergraduate teach the students in the west in the village is not only show knowledge,but also arrange some activities to make students learn things in order that their study and life can be introduced and inspired.Besides,it also can arise their motive to learn and their hope to outer developed city so that they will make progress.What is more,undergraduate will convey new thinking and attitude to the village,too.Volunteering to teach in the west can form social responsibility and common-mind in modern college students.It also cut the pressure the resource of the teacher in the west to some extent.

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