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【题目要求】
In some cultures the old age is more valued,while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
【考题和关键词解析】
本考题属于典型的社会类。以前类似考题曾考过“老年人与年轻人之间的不同”和“Every generation of people is different in important ways”.而本考题在考查范围上有所定位, 用了“valued”这个词。此题属于“Discuss类”, 有两个方面, 在论证时需要运用对称式写法。
【全篇段落提纲】
开头段: (铺垫背景, 引出话题)
在不同的社会和文化背景下(under diverse social and cultural circumstances), 公众对老年人和年轻人的重视度有所不同(people from dissimilar backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards the same issue with respect to the value of the old and youth respectively.)必须承认，双方都各有价值和优点。(Admittedly,there are merits concerning both sides.)
主体第一段: (a. 指明老年人的价值和优势&b.重视老年人的原因或目的)
a.
饱经风霜(Having experienced and endured all the hardships of life);
富有经验，知识广博(sufficiently experienced and well knowledged)
怀旧,懂得珍惜,容易满足,更能吃苦耐劳,更加理智 (reminiscent-inclined, more sensible to cherish, easily contented, bear hard work, more reasonable)
有丰富的人生观和价值观(abundant philosophy , social values and outlook on life); 社会责任感强(strong sense of social responsibility)
b.
充分开发老年资源(Well explore the resources of the old)，提高老年人生命和生活质量，构建和谐社会，促进人口老龄化与经济、社会协调发展，实现社会可持续发展。实行积极的老龄化对策：健康、参与和保障。(enhance the life expectancy and standard to construct a harmonious society which promotes the coordinate growth of economy and sustainable development as well,with the implement of positive countermeasure involving health, participation and ensurance.)
主体第二段: (a. 指明年轻人的价值和优势& b. 重视年轻人的原因或目的)
a.
有活力的, 精力充沛,可塑性强(dynamic，energetic，moldable)
富于创新、勇于挑战(innovative，challengeable)
善于学习和接受新事物、新想法(be adept in learning and adopting up-to-date objects and notions.)
独立性强，有幽默感和灵活性，有上进心，(independent, with sense of humor,flexible,striving)
接受了更好的教育，有竞争意识和合作意识，( better cultivated, with competitive and cooperative spirit)
熟知科技知识，善于沟通交流(well-informed of advanced technology, skillful in communication)
b.
给社会发展注入新的动力和提供更广阔的空间(novel motive power for social advancement with a wider range)
创造出更多的挑战和机遇(create more challenges and opportunities)
鼓励年轻人致力于奉献社会，实现人生目标和社会价值(encourage youth to devote themselves to society for the sake of achieving life goal and social value)
结尾段：折中的写法(重申老年人和年轻人各有不同价值，都应受同等的重视)
各自有不能比拟的优点和不可取代的价值，不应偏颇对待
On account of the incomparable advantages and irreplaceable value possessed by the old and youth respectively, special importance deserves to be attached to both accordingly to an identical extent rather than prejudiced.
作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误。
People from dissimilar backgrounds are likely to have divergent attitudes towards the value of the old and the youth respectively.It is natural to grow from a new born eventually to a elderly as a human being. Every step that we take should be valued and appreciated as an individual. That comes down to my own view towards today's topic with regards to how we should veiw the youth or the elderly. Thanks to the increasingly developed technologies as the medicine care, food industry, human beings are now living a long period of time. The older have experienced and endured all the hardships which young age wouldn't have imaged.They are of great value for the society. The older doctors who are always suffiently experienced and well knowleged are great asset for both individual patient and the medical care field. Owing to the dedication of the old generation's work in every aspect of our life , now we don't need to start at the beginning. Without the accumulation of the older's , history won't exsit as well as the civilization itself. Youth are on the other hand possess more energy than their experence leading to their curiosity and creativity. The young are strikingly encouraged to be the mainstream power devoting themselves to the development of our society in order to acheive social value and goal. Without the dynamic generation, the society won't moving on as it is now . on account of the incomparable advangtages and irresplaceable value possessed by the old and youth repectively, special importance should be attached to both.
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