2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hey,my friend.I'm ready for introducing you an interesting place of my hometown,Shunde.Shunde,a beautiful country,is the place I live more than 15 years.It has another name called "the Hometown of the World".Here,you can taste many special food that you haven't tried in your country.And the people here are so friendly so it will be an excellent travel for you to go sightseeing.Actually,there are some places that it's worth going.Such as Qinghui Yuan,Shunfeng Mountain Garden and so on.Welcome you to my hometown and I'm looking forward to taking you to see that!!