有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
As we all know,more and more people draw a conclusion while they are seeing or listening instead of thinking over it's true or not. But it's unwise to us for that.If all the people focus on things which only through eyes or ears not go through brain,as a result,we'll do more wrong things beyond repair.What's wrose,when you recalled,you must be too late to regret it,but it didn't make up. So,in order to have a happy memory,we should think seriously about the whole story so that draw the right conclusion.Only do like this can we unregretful and wise.
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