有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
As we all know,more and more people draw a conclusion while they are seeing or listening instead of thinking over it's true or not. But it's unwise to us for that.If all the people focus on things which only through eyes or ears not go through brains,as a result,we will do more wrong things beyond repair.What's worse,when you recalled,you must be too late to regret it,but it didn't make up. So,in order to have a happy memory,we should think seriously about the whole story so that we can draw the right conclusion.Only do like this can we unregretful and wise.
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