Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Fast food has flooded in our lives nowadays.There is getting more popular in China. Why fast food popular in China?There are several reasons contributing to it.On the one hand,it is a good replacement when we are in hurry and have no enough time to prepare food by ourselves.It can help us to save much time.In addition,fast food is cheaper and various,so we can taste different kinds of food by using less money.Last but not least, High saturated and trans fat along with high sodium content damages the arteries and high cholesterol clog the arteries. Concerning fast food,different people have different attitudes.As far as I am concerned,fast food is not good for our health because it lacks nutritions.So,all in all,human being should think twice if they want to eat fast foods in order to keep away from the nagative impacts.If you have time,cooking by yourself is a best choice.