Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
Fast food has flooded in our lives nowadays.There is getting more popular in China. Why fast food popular in China?There are several reasons contributing to it.On the one hand,it is a good replacement when we are in hurry and have no enough time to prepare food by ourselves.It can help us to save much time.In addition,fast food is cheaper and various,so we can taste different kinds of food by using less money.Last but not least,fast food is very suitable for young children。 Concerning fast food,different people have different attitudes.As far as I am concerned,fast food is not good for our health because it lacks nutritions.So,all in all,human being should think twice if they want to eat fast foods in order to keep away from the nagative impacts.If you have time,cooking by yourself is a best choice.