英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46218
要求:
2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Fast food has flooded in our lives nowadays.There is getting more popular in China. Why fast food popular in China?There are several reasons contributing to it.On the one hand,it is a good replacement when we are in hurry and have no enough time to prepare food by ourselves.It can help us to save much time.In addition,fast food is cheaper and various,so we can taste different kinds of food by using less money.Last but not least,fast food is very suitable for young children。 Concerning fast food,different people have different attitudes.As far as I am concerned,fast food is not good for our health because it lacks nutritions.So,all in all,human being should think twice if they want to eat fast foods in order to keep away from the nagative impacts.If you have time,cooking by yourself is a best choice.

会员评论0个评论)
zhaoyaya
金币:51

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:88.5好人东奇页

人气:118发布:2013-05-20

得分:88.5广大

人气:100发布:2013-10-17

得分:88.0海底礁石

人气:31发布:2013-11-14

得分:87.5RSH123456

人气:31发布:2014-04-09

得分:86.5叮咚叮咚

人气:40发布:2014-04-06