小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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A nine-year-old dog named Dodo has become one of my important persons in my life.The first time we met was my ten-year-old birthday that he was brought by my father as a present to me . What's more, he eats a lot and he is getting fatter and fatter. His size is much bigger than my neighbour s' dogs.But, the relationship between us will be eternal no matter how fat he becomes.