一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Yesterday,i got many things to do . First and foremost, i helped my mom with housework in the morning.We cleaned all the angles in our house and swept the rooms.In addition,i was doing homework in the afternoon and i was told by my mom that i could watch television and play table tennis after my homework was finished .I instructed the commitment and i played table tennis with my friends and watched TV in the evening.What a solid day it was .