小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Last night , i went to Jim's home and i saw a picture with all of his family members.At the begining, the one on the left is Jim's big brother John Smith .He is a soldier.Besides that , the gril sits in front of Jim is his little sister and she is an English teacher at a college. Last but not least, the lady in the middle and the man nears to Jim are his mother and father.They are police officer.