文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
It is wrong when we make a decision riget now As we all known,people always like to make a decision when they seen,listened something.It is unwisdom to do this.But how should we do to avoid this thing happen? Reasons for this can be listed as follows. From my point of view,I think, In the first palce,we should learn more knownledge before it In the secong place,It is useful to ask someone who known this thing, Last but not the least,read more related to it will help us think all the side . To sum up,above all,we can't decide something without thought compelety,Leap before doing
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