过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够简单运用一些从句;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
It is wrong when we make a decision riget now As we all known,people always like to make a decision when they seen,listened something.It is unwisdom to do this.But how should we do to avoid this thing happened? Reasons for this can be as follows. From my point of view,I think, In the first palce,we should learn more knownledge before it. In the second place,It is useful to ask someone who known this thing, Last but not least,read more related to it will help us think all the side . To sum up,above all,we can't decide the something without thought compelety,Leap before doing
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