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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6008
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分46.5分
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文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;若增加一些长难句的使用,文章会更好。

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my school I am very happy to be a student . My school is so beatiful that I do not want to go home . Our school has three buildings which is teaching building . And has a small building which is our canteen . Not only we have many beautiful buildings but also we have a lot of green plants . For example,apple trees and mango trees and so on. Our teacher all are very friendly and nice . Although sometimes they are very serious for us when they are teaching.

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