2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shopping Nowadays,many people are love online shopping at home.So the online shopping is devloped more and more fashional.Everything has two aspects,so the online shopping also has good and bad two sides. The online shopping has many benefits,and it also has some problems.As for the online shopping,I have some advice for the people who usually online shopping by his or her computer. In my advice,firstly,I think we should improve our awareness of online shopping.Secondly,we have to take a good attitude on the online shopping.Thridly,we shouldn't take more attention on the online shopping. According for some shows,many people was cheatting online shopping,which make our understand we should have a good policy on online shopping.