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Dear Xiao Ming: I very happy hear that you will visit my hometown. well, china is a beautiful place, there are have many cities you can visit. now, I can give you some suggetion on my opinion. firstly, you can go to Beijing. Beijing is our captal, and the city is a culture interactive with economic and political activities city. you can felling that a quicly develpmented city in beijing. secondly, I very like Xizang, I have adream that I can have a trip in Xizang. this place can beauty our spirit world. Xizang is a religion city, there have many temples, Budalagong is famous one of these temples. if you have ingtresting, i will go to with you. lastly, I hope you can go to sanya, Hainnan island. sea is famous place, the coast is most beautiful I seen. Ok, the three city is my suggetion, I hope you can come quikly. Xiao Wang
