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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
Nowadays the problem of parents being salves to the children has become a matter of great concern for the general public in the modern society. Parents always content no matter what the children need. Not only in money,but also in spirit it all makes parents feel great strain under the burden of raising a child. With the growth of children, the parents are willing to do anything for them in order to create a better environment for the kids so that they can fully focus on the study. However, the parents didn't get the awareness of their overindulgence has caused the deficiency of the independence of the kids. If children too dependent on their parents,it will lose more chance to exercise themselves. Therefore,parents should give their children more encouragement to make children grow up faster and also to avoid being slaves. There is no doubt that parents' behavior will be of great help to shape them into useful talents.
