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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5735
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Avoid the irrelevant information When it comes to the topic that the impact of the information explosion,most people refer to a saying"A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention."Some of the information are irrelevant. With the development of technology and Intetnet,people can seek for information through electrical products.However, there is some irrelevant information distracting us every day.And these information spends us a lot of time and energy.For example,when you refer to the Internet to find what are the advantages of eating apples,you would find that the first few information is an advertisement about the telephone number and address of selling apples.Encountering these situations,you have to spend much more time and energy on searching for useful information.Thus,you should learn to avoid the irrelevant information.These are three following advice for this statement.As you want to search for the information,you should go to regular website.In addition,when irrelevant information from some APPs distracts you,you can upload the APPs and download again in regular website.What's more,if you a website spread some illegal or harmful information,you can report this website. To sum up,the irrelevant information distracts us nowadays,and we should learn to avoid them.

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